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Wednesday, November 27, 2019

The ultimate story web

Hey bloggers,

Dureing reading we red the book called; Spider Soup.
It was about a spider who died ... Jokes the out come is that it was alive! We had  to write out the characters, setting, problem, actions, and the out come in our story web.
Please give me a nice comment. I found this activetie hard, can you spot the feelings?


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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 28, 2019 at 9:28 AM

    hi Taylor.
    I like how you put in a lot of detail in the actions.
    I have done a story web like that but with a little more detail.
    this story web reminds me about mine when I was in room two. can you add more detail in the settings,problem and in the characters too.
    From Daniel

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  2. AnonymousDecember 2, 2019 at 12:59 PM

    hi Taylor
    I like how you put in a lot of detail but not to much
    I also had to do a story wed but more detail in it
    can you make it more clear to read
    from daniel

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  3. AnonymousDecember 3, 2019 at 2:17 PM

    hi taylor its steven
    i like how you added all of that information

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