Thursday, November 21, 2019
My best weekend yet!
This week, Miss lee asked use to wirte a fabulous recount for our weekend. We had to add all the descriptive tools we know, like allitarition, metahors, similes, verbs, adjectives, adrevbs... but I didn't use all the described tools I know.
I chose to write about my best weekend yet.
Go and have a read on by book I am sure you will like it. Can you please rate 10 star rateing.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Taylor it's Leon your friend.
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote the chapters.
That reminds me of the chapter book I'm making.
Why don't you try writing what page the chapter was on?
Keep going Taylor try to finish the work you haven't done.
From Leon.
Hi taylor
ReplyDeleteI like that you teached your mum alliteration.
I have also have been swimming and made a big splash.
now can you please finish you're writing.
from Kingston