Hey readers I have been working on my 100 word count. 100 word count is were we have to use a prompt for the week(The teacher will give us the prompt every week) and we have to write a short story using that prompt or using the words at some point in the writing. The piece of writing has to be exactly 100 words. Here it is, please leave me a comment.
Week 5 Balloon never frightened brown kicked It was my birthday, we had lots of fun. The house was almost full of balloons. The colors of the balloons were brown, purple, green, blue, yellow and some red. I’d never had balloons but this time I did have balloons. I kept`vv on running through the house kicking the balloons. We had the cake, it was brown chocolate, my favorite. It was now time for the Pinata. I whacked it 10 times and it didn’t come down so I got my dad to hit it and then it came down. I ended up having a whole lot of lollies.
Hi I like the start but just make it a little bit exiting. so then it can grab the reader to the story. I like that you talk about what you have to do. but when you said a short story I thought it was a 100 words and I think that is a lot of wards.
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor I like you interesting story. I can't see kicked in the story maybe you could fix that? I made a with those promps.
ReplyDeleteHey Taylor, it's me Leon
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I can't believe that I have found you
This year is pretty good so far
How is the new school?
Tell Hunter about the great news, I hope you had a great birthday
THIS IS GREAT I CAN TALK TO YOU!!!
Try to get back to this school I really want to see you
I saw you once and I tried to get your attention but you didn't hear
Bye Taylor reply as soon as possible
Oh by the way what you did is cool