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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

snapshot writing

 Hi readers 

I have been working on show don't tell.Show don't tell is where you have to show how you are feeling and you can't say how you feel.  I used unsplash  to get the picture of the seagulls and the picture of Statue of Liberty.  I wrote the story based on the picture. The picture of me  was taken outside and the app remove b.g. to remove the background. Then I inserted the image of me and then .......poof

AGHHHHHHHH I screamed as white big seagull

Sea gulls  flew around me. As I jumped down from the plane I landed on the statue of liberty's crown.  I tried not to look down but I did.AGHHHHHHHH I screamed again so I just looked up and tried to dream of me sleeping on the clouds. But I couldn’t stop my heart from beating like a speeding motorbike at a motorcross pit going over a jump.  Beat, beat. My tonge was covered in bird poo. 

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  1. Mrs CassidyAugust 27, 2020 at 9:18 PM

    Your stories are AMAZING to read Taylor.
    You have made a super job at positioning your image as it really looks like this is a photo of you jumping.I think it's brilliant.Your words gave me a picture in my head.
    FANTASTIC work👍😊

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2020 at 11:03 AM

      Hi Mrs Cassidy
      Thank you for commenting.I enjoyed making the picture,and I tried to make it look like I was sitting on the top of the Statue of Liberty's crown.
      bye!

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  2. UnknownSeptember 11, 2020 at 2:43 PM

    Wow Taylor, what a great story!

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2020 at 1:53 PM

      Hi,
      Thank you for the commenting

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