I writ why we should have pet chickens & roosters school.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 8, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Taylor,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made a slideshow instead of a normal doc and also how you did lots of example. Next time when you write the letter you should include all of your examples and could you please add how the roosters would stay in the school.
Hi Taylor, I like how you have a lot of writing. I like how you have written it in a letter structure. Next time could you write it in a persuasive writing structure.
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