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Thursday, May 2, 2019

my holiday

I tried to write about my holiday with all the info I could give.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Taylor!
    hammer sprigs is fun! isent it!
    thats cool that your sibblings liked it.
    can you add more about the pool you went in.
    FROM SONNY!!!!!

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  2. Hello Taylor.
    Hammer springs is cool!
    You can write more about the pools!
    From LEON!!!!!!!

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  3. Hello Taylor.
    This is Tama from room 6. i love your story that you made about the weekend. i love how you put when you went their. you went to hanmer wow great when did you can back?. next time you could mabey tell us more about it.

    From Tama

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  4. Hey Taylor it's Yavnit from Hornby Primary School.
    I like your writing because you told me when you went to Hanmer Springs. I have been to Hanmer 1 time. I liked it there. What else did you do while you were in Hanmer?

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